Tuesday 24 May 2016

Palindrome poem

Palindrome poem
NYLD
Speaking to speech
Inspirational
Speech to speaking
NYLD


NYLD
Loud music and fun
Writing down quotes
Amazing
Quotes written down
Fun and loud music
NYLD

Tuesday 17 May 2016

Iway cycling

Iway cycling day

I jumped on the bike and sped off up the cones doing zig zags.

I liked the lunch break we got to play on the bike track and pretend we were cars.

I learnt how to mount,dismount,turn and ride with a partner.I feel way more confident on a bike.

The instructors made everything clear and they were very nice.

The town was usual enough


The hill was usual enough; it had
A house, a sheep, a patch of grass, a seat
In the middle, and even a big map with a glass top
I like.   My brother, my cousins and I
Did what girls do – rested in the hot sun
drank, made big smelly mud balls, dodged the mad
Parents, crept like mice through the long green grass with a hope that we will get to the top,
Great long view,
Doing nothing important.

Tuesday 12 April 2016

Highland home camp writing


I see the big and green forest.I smell the pine trees.I hear the birds chrping away. I'm feeling excited like it id my birthday.
Writing here.  A MOMENT IN TIME
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IALT
Write about a moment in present tense.
WILF
  • detailed adjectives and verbs.
This helps the reader imagine the activity in detail.
INCLUDE
What I am doing
Your senses:
  • What I am feeling
  • What I can see
  • What I can  hear
  • What I can smell
Use a simile to help the reader understand the feelings you had while doing that activity.
Your overall opinion of the activity.  What you thought about it and who you think might enjoy it.

I feel the icy cold liquid fill my shoes. I see the bottom of the water like a tornado when we step on the sand.I hear the sound of water splashing when we plunge yourself into the water.I smell the sweat coming off our heads like a small sun shower.









I'm feeling determined and strong like a boxer ,my insides are turning so much I feel like fainting. I see the top, it looks like it is as tall as a giant and as thin as a twig.I smell the sweat coming off me and the rope that smelt a lot like hay and old moss. I hear the sound of my breath huffing and gasping like a donkey.


I’m feeling excited like a animal who has caught its prey, hot like a bonfire and anxious for a swim. I can see the blazing hot sun shining down at us. I hear a bee buzzing, people chatting and the once and awhile breeze. I smell sand and water like the beach but no salt.

I'm feeling tired like a dog that has been playing fetch. I smell the plants and bird droppings like it was the smell I smell everyday.I hear the birds chirping but they are hidden away.I see all the native plants, big trees and my group.We continued walking but when we got there we saw all the other groups had beaten us.


Tuesday 5 April 2016

My Sentence Types.

Sentence types.
Opener sentence.

As we went to the cave, I got excited seeing the cave weta.
  When I woke up,I had an energy rush.

 Before we went for the walk I had a big breakfast.

Ialt: Write a sentence that has a serial pattern.
In the cave Hadley talked, Kennedy watched and Allen lead the way.
   
  At night Ruby turned her torch on, Taylor and Jemma talked and the rest of us slept peacefully.
  

  Somewhere a bird tweets, parents cook and children yell.
Interrupter sentences
    Eating the food,feeling ill, like I was going to throw up.
       
      Running in the cold, getting warmer by the stride, feeling great anyway.

       Waking up, looking and feeling tired, sleeping again.